English Revision – More Model Answers

Like the last post, this post includes a Foundation paper model answer. Can you mark it? Can you improve it? Identify what persuasive features the writer has used for effect?

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Feel free to add your own answers to this post and I and other students could supportively critique the response: but remember, if you are making feedback comments, be constructive, be specific and be kind!

Keep revising!

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